Final Copies

My Evaluation

Contents Page- Drafts & Final

Draft 1;

Draft 2;

• Added a coloured box beneath main images
• Added circle with page numbers of the article with the model on (Kerrang! did this with their Slash article)

Draft 3;

• Changed image on cover as the model smoking doesn't make him look like a rolemodel
• Added a coloured box under the 'main article' subheading to make it the most obvious sub-heading section so the reader doesn't have to search through all the text to find it

Final draft;

• Added an image of myself by the editor's letter to make it more personal
• Added 2 images from another photoshoot by the side of the subheadings to make it look more professional (Kerrang! had multiple images from seperate shoots to relate to the articles)

Contents Page- Inital Planning

Contents Page- Images

As well as my photos from my shoot with my front cover model I took a shoot of models Nathan, Helena, Sam and Jordan and made them look as if they were part of a band. These are my edits that I may use:

Since I plan to include an editors' letter, here are some images of me I may use to go with it: