Saturday, 20 April 2013

DPS Feedback


Do the pages engage the reader’s interest immediately- if ‘yes’, why do you think this is. If ‘no’ wire some suggestions to improve this quality
  •          Yes- smiling model and bright colours
  •          Bright yellow stands out
  •          Similar photo to front cover
  •          Good, large images
  •          Yes, bright colours

What does the heading reveal about the potential reader?
  •          They want to know more about rockstars and details about their life
  •         Someone who likes to hear about success
  •          They like the following celebs news

Who do you think this magazine is targeting and how can you tell?
  •          Teenagers- girls and boys, gossip about girlfriends but male artist may appeal to guys
  •          Female- love object, gossip about the new girlfriend. Male- hard hitting introduction
  •         Girls- about his girlfriend

Offer one comment about the use of images. It can either be positive or constructive.
  •          Good image- eye contact
  •          Good image, clear, but heading covering too much of his head
  •          Like the fact there are 2 images from separate photoshoots

Offer one comment about the use of language. It can either be positive or constructive.
  •          Chatty and casual, really appeals to target audience
  •          Good story
  •          Simple and clear, easy to read

Rate out of 10:
  •          10- looks very professional
  •          10
  •          9


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